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Emerald City Ghosts's avatar

Love this! There’s so much happening in each sentence—no wasted words here!

Dissemblink Blink's avatar

First impression: a curse on you for posting old content.

I scroll. It's short. Ookay

Sucked in with figuring out what the fuck.

Mid impression: If you were half as good as Lyn Hejinian you would be a thousand times better than most people doing this and you are although maybe not half and certainly it's unfair to compare she had way longer. Edit to: A thousand times better than most people doing this.

Fin impression: Badass. A Toast

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