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Kat Rigel's avatar

“as goats weep eerie immersion in tandem to two step by cello”

I’m pretty sure that this line alone is going to haunt my dreams.

If not the goats then the image of ending up splattered on the rocks below will definitely take over.

Bravo for eliciting such a visceral reaction to your words.

Ryan William Mills's avatar

“at Cal-Hul our fleet must flee, to the hull at Castlemartin

four thousand years of forest our fishguard departed”

Amid the roiling boisterous lines, these ones came at me through a clearing and I saw a whole story with them, a shanty within the shanty

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