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Buzz Kantwrite's avatar

Okay. That's enough talent out of you. Go do something mediocre for awhile. Thanks.

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Thank you my friend!

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Ahh so glad to hear, J. Always, thank you for the read and share.

JHong's avatar

Felt all the seasons with this one πŸͺΎπŸŒ»

Jesse Gleim Writer's avatar

Love your turns of phrase, Kyle! I mean, β€œThe pelt of cold tales on an ancient tongue” good God, absolutely brilliant! Another great poem.

Despina Kay's avatar

Wow Kyle. I love it!

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Thank you so much, Despina! :)

G. L. Ford's avatar

Reminds me of an old poem of mine, which will not format properly here:

Throw me down from the mountaintop

Pry open my mouth

Remove the diamond

- good stuff!

Kyle Ryan's avatar

I like it, GL! And thank you for checking line out. :)

hidden among roots's avatar

What a beauty!

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Thank you so much!! :)

Paul R. Pace's avatar

Beautiful work

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Ahh big thanks, Paul!!

Cedric's avatar

Tenderly daunting. These needs a voiceover comrade!

Kyle Ryan's avatar

I need to add one. Thank you, C!!

Mandy | Greater Ape's avatar

I have learned so many words reading your work, Kyle.

Thanks for making me work for it. I can feel myself getting smarter. πŸ˜‚

Kyle Ryan's avatar

Hahaha I have a teacher’s heart, Mandy